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Somewhere in the centre of Greenland, a snowflake fell. It tumbled in the chaotic winds, but at last it landed, embedded in white. As time passed, more snow fell, pressing down on the layers below. The snowflake shattered, compressed against its compatriots. It could no longer be called snow; it was too hard, too harsh. It was ice.

Ten thousand years passed. The ice inched infinitesimally to the sea, lifted and lubricated by a layer of water. It moaned a dirge of creaks and groans, strained by the unseen ground below. Slowly, so slowly, it crawled forward, seeking the salty kiss of the sea.

The land was as tortured as the ice. Steep cliffs funnelled into the ocean, carving crevasses and creases that creaked and complained. The tide met and eroded the face of the glacier, fighting the relentless onwards pressure of ten thousand years of snowflakes.

A growl like thunder echoed around the fjord. With a crowd of attendants shattered from its sides, a terrible beauty was born. As the iceberg broke from the glacier, it surged downwards, displacing a billion tonnes of water in a wild rush. The raw faces of this glacial diamond shone prismatic blues that contrasted with the soft whites of its upper surface to look deceptively serene.

Its mile-long body was crushed and battered over the next two years. It was a harsh journey down 40 miles of fjord, and it lost half of itself, bashed and sundered in the relentless jostling. Some pieces were significant siblings; others shattered and melted into the sea.

In 1911, the iceberg freed itself from the cluttered fjord. It found freedom in the powerful west Greenland current, and dragged along the coast of Canada. The shallow waters near Labrador ensnared it, and it looked certain to settle there, seeping its fresh waters away into the frigid salt. It shrank and melted over many months, but in January 1912, something strange happened.

The moon shone enormous in the sky. Not only was it a full moon, but the moon was closer than it had been in 1,400 years. The gravitational effect on the tide was remarkable, amplified by the fact that the day before marked the Earth's perihelion, its closest approach to the sun. The iceberg and its stranded associates were lifted in a massive spring tide, and slipped back out into deeper water. The Labrador current embraced them and, over the next few months, took them south in an unusual crowd.

The plethora of ice did not go unremarked. The ships scattered across the Atlantic spread wireless warnings amongst themselves. Some ships took heed; others surged on, confident in their engineering and the power of man.

The iceberg continued, indifferent. Below the water its skirts spread wide. At some point, it gained a scrape of red paint. No matter. South it went, to the warmth, fading away, melting to smaller than a snowflake.

Date: 2014-08-04 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penpusher.livejournal.com
Easy come, easy go! Congrats on a titanic tale.

Date: 2014-08-04 11:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beeker121.livejournal.com
Oh, how fun to hear the story of the titanic from the one angle I don't think anyone has used before. Your descriptive language in this is lovely.

Date: 2014-08-05 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smellykaka.livejournal.com
i enjoyed this. Was it intended to be so telegraphed? I at an inkling at the end of paragraph 2 and was pretty sure at the end of paragraph 4.

Date: 2014-08-05 12:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com
What a confluence of ill luck for the passengers on the Titanic. Beautifully told here, though, including the strangenesses that circumvented the iceberg's expected fate.

Date: 2014-08-05 06:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karmasoup.livejournal.com
Absofrickgen brilliant! The research that must have gone into this is astounding, and the details are quite compelling... so many elements coming together to collide into one powerfully impactful moment, and then, back into nothing. Fantastic piece of work.

Date: 2014-08-05 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mistearyusdiva2.livejournal.com
OMG .... this is such a brilliant idea..... the story of the icebeg .... while we go on and on about the fated Titanic .... the maximum we have ever heard about the icerberg is .... " Iceberg ahead " ..... the story of the birth of that terrible beauty had but to be told and I am so glad you did that so beautifully.

" At some point it gained some red paint. No matter " and then moved on to what .... just melt down to smaller than a snowflake. ...Brilliant imagination :) Well Done

Date: 2014-08-05 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ryl.livejournal.com
Very nicely done. A gripping tale of an unknown yet vital player in a disastrous tale!

Date: 2014-08-06 04:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
I like how something so momentous to us was a bare touch of paint to the iceberg. :)

Date: 2014-08-06 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bleodswean.livejournal.com
Ah!!! Gloriously poetic and superbly well-done. Haunting.

Date: 2014-08-06 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mamas-minion.livejournal.com
Nice a glacial view of the tittanic, I really enjoyed the fjords and vistas you painted in my mind with words.

Date: 2014-08-06 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kajel.livejournal.com
This was brilliant! I loved the build up and imagery, realizing what was going to happen and then the decent into nothing.

Date: 2014-08-07 03:39 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Your story is unsinkable - unlike that ship with the red paint.

Who would have thought one little snowflake could have started that maritime disaster

Date: 2014-08-07 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tatdatcm.livejournal.com
I love how you used the prompt to tell this beautiful and different side of a story we all know so well. Your descriptions are absolutely gorgeous.

Date: 2014-08-07 04:40 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I've never thought about it from that perspective! Interesting!

Date: 2014-08-07 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xlovebecomesher.livejournal.com
Sorry I left the anon comment thinking I was signed in!

Date: 2014-08-07 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] favoritebean.livejournal.com
I love your take on the topic. Great piece.
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