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Amanda looked at her watch, and leaned forward to glare at the front door. She wriggled her phone out of her jeans pocket, a bit of a struggle in the confines of the car seat, and double-checked the time. They were going to be late, dammit.

She tapped her fingers impatiently on the steering wheel. It was tempting to honk the horn until her husband finally emerged. Despite his work hauling him all over the country, he could never get it into his head that you had to be there well before the flight time, that check-in wasn't something that you just breezed through fifteen minutes beforehand.

Trouble was, he somehow always managed it, schmoozing at the staff and getting on the plane.

He wasn't the one flying this time, though. Amanda had been anticipating this trip for months. Her father, a man her mother described as "a deadbeat perma-child", had contacted her for the first time in 18 years. Despite the history- forgotten birthdays, promised visits that never eventuated, Christmas gifts that never arrived- she was looking forward to seeing him, if for no other reason than to tell him that she never wanted to see him again. She hadn't quite decided.

Nervousness coiled in her stomach, and she gave in to the impulse. She leaned on the horn, blat blat blaaat, and finally he came out. He climbed into the passenger seat, grinned at her, and said "Ready to go?"

Amanda repressed the urge to snarl at him, and started the car in silence. In her peripheral vision she could see Paul open his mouth as if to speak, but change his mind. She accelerated roughly down the street, the tension in her body expressed in her foot. A corner of her mind felt guilty; she wasn't really mad at him, just overwhelmed with anxiety, nerves and the memory of past hurts.

The 20-minute drive to the airport passed without conversation. Amanda stopped the car in the drop-off zone outside the main doors, pulled the key from the ignition, and sat for a moment with her hands in her lap. With a deep breath, she pulled the lever to open the boot, opened the car door and went around to the back. Paul had already collected a luggage trolley from a rack beneath the "Drop-off zone - 5 minutes or less" sign.

He hauled her suitcase out and dropped it on the trolley. She looked at him, and proffered the car keys. "I'm sorry," she said. "It's not-"

Paul pulled her close and hugged her. "It's okay," he said. "I know this must be hard for you."

She nodded, snuggled against his chest. A moment passed, and with another deep breath she stood up straight.

Paul kissed her on the forehead. "It'll be okay. He'll either have got his act together and realised that he's been a fool not to be part of your life, or he's a total dickhead and you'll be right there to kick him in the crotch."

Amanda laughed, offering him the keys again. Paul always made everything all right. He tucked the keys into a pocket, and turned back to rummage in the boot. "If he's a dickhead, I'll kick him twice. He deserves it."

He grinned at her. "Now now, stay calm," he said. He held out her carry-on bag. Amanda took it, and slung the strap over her shoulder. Together they wrangled the trolley up onto the footpath, battling the obligatory wonky wheel.

Paul gave her one last kiss, confirmed her return flight details, and climbed into the car. He waved over his shoulder as he drove away; Amanda waved back.

She pushed her trolley through the automatic doors, and into the bustling airport crowds. Whatever happened on the trip, it would be okay. There was one man in her life she could count on.

Date: 2014-05-19 12:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] notodette.livejournal.com
Really nicely done.

Date: 2014-05-19 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bleodswean.livejournal.com
Very nicely done. You conveyed the story and important aspects of both charas quickly and efficiently. The dialogue was genuine.

Date: 2014-05-19 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adoptedwriter.livejournal.com
So do we get to find out how this reunion goes? I'm curious now! AW

Date: 2014-05-19 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kagomeshuko.livejournal.com
Awww . . . only a "maybe" about finding out about the reunion!

Date: 2014-05-20 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smellykaka.livejournal.com
Straight over my head making dents on the wall behind me.

Date: 2014-05-20 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roina-arwen.livejournal.com
Very sweet, good characterizations. I like the "stay calm" and the "carry-on" bag. ;)

Date: 2014-05-20 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lrig-rorrim.livejournal.com
I enjoyed the sense of tension in this one - I'm one of those people who likes to be at the airport early, too, so I related to Amanda a lot. The dialogue is really strong!

The connection to the "keep calm" part of the meme is really clear, but I was a little less sure about the "end this meme" part - this might just be a case of me being a little dense this morning, though.

Date: 2014-05-20 06:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] raven-annabelle.livejournal.com
I really liked this, and am interested to see what happens! Do we get to see?

Date: 2014-05-20 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mamas-minion.livejournal.com
well written the emotions come across very well.

Date: 2014-05-21 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] onda-bianca.livejournal.com
I liked this line: "she was looking forward to seeing him, if for no other reason than to tell him that she never wanted to see him again. "

Although a sad situation, I love how she has a positive outlook and how things are okay with her regardless of the outcome of the meeting.

Date: 2014-05-21 12:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com
Very nicely done. I liked that you managed to put a lot of emotion into a very small piece.

I also want to know what happens next.

Date: 2014-05-21 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com
Different take on the theme - not bad!

Date: 2014-05-22 09:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] favoritebean.livejournal.com
Now I want to know what happens when she gets there. I hope to see the conclusion to this piece.

Date: 2014-05-22 10:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uncawes.livejournal.com
Haha, of course you can breeze through check-in. That's what elite frequent flyer status is for :) And elite ff's sometimes forget that it's NOT that simple for infrequent flyers

Your dialogue was totally believable, and the wonky wheel on the trolley brought a smile.
Nice job

Date: 2014-05-22 01:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternal-ot.livejournal.com
Like all others i am hanging on for more...A nice read..loved the conversations....made me smile at places...Well written!

Date: 2014-05-22 05:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solstice-singer.livejournal.com
It's always good to know you have at least one person in your corner.

Date: 2014-05-22 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cheshire23.livejournal.com
I think it's easier for Paul to say how Amanda "should" feel or handle this than it would be to be in Amanda's situation.

Date: 2014-05-22 10:46 pm (UTC)

Date: 2014-05-23 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com
I'm surprised she wanted to have anything to do with her father. It's a little late to regret all those years of abandonment!
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