My initial version ended at "Maybe she was too old for firsts. Maybe all her life offered now was lasts, slipping by unnoticed, unneeded." but I decided it was a little too bleak ;)
And thanks - I particularly like that line, and it speaks to my experience!
And thanks for commenting. Was starting to think everyone hated this one. :/
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Date: 2015-02-11 08:08 am (UTC)And thanks - I particularly like that line, and it speaks to my experience!
And thanks for commenting. Was starting to think everyone hated this one. :/