http://crisp-sobriety.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] crisp-sobriety.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jexia 2015-01-20 12:14 am (UTC)

I just love the sense of hopelessness in this, and how the narrator will only go mad when the signal *doesn't* come back around. That's a really neat little point of characterization, and it nicely caps off the stakes you've established here.

Seriously, this was really good.

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