Hmmm, I get what you're saying. I could clarify in that final paragraph.
She shuddered, christening her baby boy with tears, and aching with the knowledge that her body had let her down. A natural birth was so important to her, and she'd failed. Her pain was delicious, flavoured with exhaustion, self-loathing, and regret, with a side-order of lingering physical discomfort. Just the way I liked it.
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Date: 2014-12-15 05:51 pm (UTC)She shuddered, christening her baby boy with tears, and aching with the knowledge that her body had let her down. A natural birth was so important to her, and she'd failed. Her pain was delicious, flavoured with exhaustion, self-loathing, and regret, with a side-order of lingering physical discomfort. Just the way I liked it.