Not having experienced a pregnancy (and not wanting to), I am a little confused about the details at the end. Did she experience tasty regret/guilt pains due to taking the epidural? Did something happen to the baby?
What I liked best, and what drove this piece on for me, was the clever play with the demon's voice: when it was active, when it dropped to make the scene progress, when it vanished, waiting for the perfect moment to collect.
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Date: 2014-12-15 05:38 pm (UTC)What I liked best, and what drove this piece on for me, was the clever play with the demon's voice: when it was active, when it dropped to make the scene progress, when it vanished, waiting for the perfect moment to collect.