http://fodschwazzle.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] fodschwazzle.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jexia 2014-12-12 10:02 pm (UTC)

The gatekeeper is right to suggest that we read this piece. This is a really tight piece. You have exposition in all the right places, never interrupting the flow of characters or story.
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