I imagined long tie-dyed skirts, grey hair back in a ponytail, dangly earrings (which I did manage to get in there). But I do find it hard to fit those descriptors in. It's not too hard to describe things, but I find people hard.
Probably because I give about zero shits about what people look like in real life, ha.
I always feel like, since Sheryl is someone the narrator is familiar with, he/she is probably not going to "notice" much about her unless it's actually doing something (like the earrings). Does that make sense?
And I don't want to be like: "Hey, is that a new skirt?" Sheryl grinned and shook her hips, the tie-dyed fabric undulating to her rhythm.
Just for the sake of description.
Blah. I don't know. If I make it through this round (unlikely) then I'll really try it next round.
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Probably because I give about zero shits about what people look like in real life, ha.
I always feel like, since Sheryl is someone the narrator is familiar with, he/she is probably not going to "notice" much about her unless it's actually doing something (like the earrings). Does that make sense?
And I don't want to be like: "Hey, is that a new skirt?" Sheryl grinned and shook her hips, the tie-dyed fabric undulating to her rhythm.
Just for the sake of description.
Blah. I don't know. If I make it through this round (unlikely) then I'll really try it next round.