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jexia ([personal profile] jexia) wrote 2014-12-09 08:45 pm (UTC)

I imagined long tie-dyed skirts, grey hair back in a ponytail, dangly earrings (which I did manage to get in there). But I do find it hard to fit those descriptors in. It's not too hard to describe things, but I find people hard.

Probably because I give about zero shits about what people look like in real life, ha.

I always feel like, since Sheryl is someone the narrator is familiar with, he/she is probably not going to "notice" much about her unless it's actually doing something (like the earrings). Does that make sense?

And I don't want to be like: "Hey, is that a new skirt?" Sheryl grinned and shook her hips, the tie-dyed fabric undulating to her rhythm.

Just for the sake of description.

Blah. I don't know. If I make it through this round (unlikely) then I'll really try it next round.

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