This is a tightly woven complete piece and it works very well! I really enjoyed the realization that we were in Jean's "memory house"! You've captured an adult life filled with regrets and yet your character manages to clean her own "house" of all that negativity in her final moments! Brava!
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Date: 2014-10-18 05:45 pm (UTC)